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10 Parts of A Man
Contributed by
TheDon
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Thursday, 11th July 2002 @ 12:47:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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1.When I say, trust me
Theres no need to worry.
2.When I say, its okay
There is nothing to fear.
3.When I say, Im your man
Im always there in a time of need.
4.When I say, Im listening
Im internalizing what you say.
5.When I say, I promise
It will come just as the next day.
6.When I say, Ill take care of it
The job has already been done.
7.When I say, Ill protect you
You will never experience harm.
8.When I say, You are my everything
There is nothing else I will ever need.
9.When I say, I love you
There is conviction deep within my heart.
10.When I say, Forever
It means well never be torn apart.
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TheDon
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2002-07-11 12:47:53]
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Re: 10 Parts of A Man
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by BluGurl6 on
Monday, 22nd July 2002 @ 09:56:38 AM AEST
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| I like your poem, it's cute. One thing though, is that is seems like something out of a fairy tale. I still like though. |
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Re: 10 Parts of A Man
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by Carmen on
Wednesday, 5th February 2003 @ 03:32:37 PM AEST
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| Your poems sweet , now if I can just find all 10 points in one man |
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Re: 10 Parts of A Man
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by Destiny on
Wednesday, 23rd April 2003 @ 04:38:31 PM AEST
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| beautiful write, if I could find a man with one of those points I'd be happy |
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Re: 10 Parts of A Man
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by ShadowsCloud on
Wednesday, 23rd April 2003 @ 06:48:14 PM AEST
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This is a very sweet poem. IF only every man was like this. I enjoyed reading it.
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