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What you always wanted
Contributed by
xsitm
on
Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 03:57:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I used to be so warm
I used to feel so much
But time has changed me for the worse
Its changed me far too much
I no longer care for anything
Not for a single word you say
My resentment turns to anger
Then slowly to decay
And so my dear all is lost
Upon this starry night
And I could care less for you
And your precious life
But dont call me a jerk
Or tell me Im an ass
And dont you dare try to say
That I have no class
The truth is Im just cold
And careless to the core
Sick of my old heart
That will beat no more
But here is your last wish
What you wanted all along
A piece of writing just for you
That might one day become a song
And it will be the tune
Ill be singing at your wake
After all I never cared
I am the perfect fake
And like all things affected
Im cheap and mostly empty
Hollowed to the core
Ive lost my soul you see
And Im no longer afraid of the dark
Because the greatest evil lives in me
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xsitm
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2005-07-25 03:57:44]
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Re: What you always wanted
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by HatchetGirl on
Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 09:21:21 AM AEST
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Wow!... the last two lines are perfect!
for a second I thought I felt your pain...
but it's just my own |
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Re: What you always wanted
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by Pyrofungus on
Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 08:10:03 PM AEST
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i remember caring too much, then not caring at all, now i care but never to the extent that i did before. people make you cold. the things they do and say...what we see.....great job tho....
if your mind is curious please take a peak at my work....and express yourself....
summer
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