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Cursed
Contributed by
Kayden
on
Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 02:46:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Your smile will haunt my mind
With you not here
Im wondering with no one to love
As time goes it's getting harder just to stay intact
My heart now
So much pain
You'll never know how much you mnet to me
My love for you the wonderful curse
The godess in bloom
Now has fallen
Soreing with wings
She looks over me
My world has fallen as you did that night
The silvery gleam has put you to rest
We both fall down
But only one lives
The hold that binds us
Death has broken it
I fall by your grave
I brake down crying
the curse has taken
Taken its towl on me
My heart now
So much pain
You'll never know how much you mnet to me
My love for you the wonderful curse
Oh in heaven
Oh in heaven
I will see
In heaven with you
I'll be in peace
Copyright ©
Kayden
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2005-07-25 14:46:36]
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Re: Cursed
(User Rating: 1 )
by Doriens_Picture on
Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 02:56:57 PM AEST
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| this is a great write but i would have liked to have seen any kind of rhyme scheme then it would have been truly amazing |
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Re: Cursed
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by Randyjohnson on
Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 03:42:22 PM AEST
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| Great poem. It is dark. |
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