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He Was So Smart..
Contributed by
Greenlee
on
Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 07:32:04 PM in AEST
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oops
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She isn't sure if anything matters
Her life is the number nine.
The whole world surrounds her
But they're fine without her
They don't know that she had a world too.
She doesn't know who she's crying for.
She blamed it on the girl
But it's not her fault.
Her words just weren't enough.
She could have saved him
Just like he saved her
When he showed her that she feels.
Torn.
Copyright ©
Greenlee
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2005-07-25 19:32:04]
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Re: He Was So Smart..
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by Unbreakable on
Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 07:36:29 PM AEST
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This poem is really good. It's so heart-felt, and it's obvious that this person is important to you. And you still have the opportunity to tell this person how they impacted your life. Great work, keep it up..
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Re: He Was So Smart..
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by shelby on
Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 10:48:16 PM AEST
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tyhank goodness it wasnt this person. this is lovely
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