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For He Is Gone
Contributed by
Tricky
on
Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 11:33:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Her eyes
they drown in tears
For he is gone
she realises her fears
Her Lips
they quiver and fold
For he is gone
the reasons are untold
Her body
it seems to fall
For he is gone
she crashes in a wall
Her life
it ends with spite
For he is gone
no longer she has light
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Tricky
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2005-07-25 23:33:44]
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Re: For He Is Gone
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by shelby on
Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 11:54:35 PM AEST
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heartbreaking write flowing and written with such honesty and visuals nicely done
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Re: For He Is Gone
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by liquidsunshine on
Tuesday, 26th July 2005 @ 12:06:31 AM AEST
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Don't take it so rough, gurlie. It'll all be okay someday even if you're sick of waiting and sick of me telling you it'll be okay.
LYLAS!!!!
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Re: For He Is Gone
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by MorningDove on
Tuesday, 26th July 2005 @ 01:18:04 AM AEST
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Nice write. Reminds me of my life not so very long ago. Now I am just writing out the rest of the pain. Give it a try. Just keep writing and one day it will all be gone. Then you will be ready to open up your heart to a new love without the past holding you back.
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Re: For He Is Gone
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by cooley1818 on
Tuesday, 26th July 2005 @ 04:33:40 AM AEST
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| short but sweet, i really liked it, i always have loved, love lost poetry, its really i care to write about anymore, you did a good job |
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Re: For He Is Gone
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by Tricky on
Tuesday, 26th July 2005 @ 11:07:57 AM AEST
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| Thanks all! I really appreciate it. |
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Re: For He Is Gone
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by psyonara on
Wednesday, 28th June 2006 @ 02:08:08 AM AEST
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| Well written! Has a good flow with the rhyming. Very sad, though, but isn't all good petry? (well, almost all...) :o) |
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