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Alone in the Crowd
Contributed by
poisonpen00ad
on
Tuesday, 26th July 2005 @ 01:47:43 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Walking toward and endless tomorrow
All that was good has gone leaving only sorrow
Left with nothing but the poverty of my faith
All that I admire has been raped
Looking for ways to speed up my demise
Seeing the world through broken eyes
Aching for something to sooth my strife
Acknowledging at the novelty that is my life
All this anger has bent my soul
My is fate sealed time to pay the toll
Buried in a living graveyard
With values withered my is soul scarred
Booming voices in my head so loud
Morally bankrupt no reason to be proud
There is no one that loves me now
Now Im all alone in the crowd
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2005-07-26 01:47:43]
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Re: Alone in the Crowd
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by poet_of_anger on
Tuesday, 26th July 2005 @ 01:52:35 AM AEST
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| A lot can be said about the quality of late night writings... this is good, very good |
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Re: Alone in the Crowd
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by lostrelic on
Tuesday, 26th July 2005 @ 04:37:51 AM AEST
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| i really loved it |
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Re: Alone in the Crowd
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by Brandyx7 on
Tuesday, 26th July 2005 @ 02:55:26 PM AEST
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The best poems always come in the middle of the night.. When your true emotions really show.
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Re: Alone in the Crowd
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by harlot20 on
Tuesday, 26th July 2005 @ 09:14:34 PM AEST
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| oh so true, i love this poem, so clever and precise and magical all at once in each word, it seems as though thers million words in one. |
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Re: Alone in the Crowd
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by Adrianna on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 08:04:09 PM AEST
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| I always write at night, definetly the best ideas come at night. I loved it. I was very moving. It brings so many feelings to me. |
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