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My girl
Contributed by
xsitm
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Tuesday, 26th July 2005 @ 07:41:01 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I dont write of my feelings
But Im writing just for you
Granting your request
Like only a true love could
Youre the footprint on my heart
I know will never fade
And every moment I spend with you
Forever makes my day
And every time were together
Is a perfect moment in time
Like two comets colliding
In the most radiant sky
Now I could tell you of your beauty
But youve heard it all before
Besides words cant do justice
To something so perfect and so pure
Instead I wish to write
What I now believe
The way I feel about you
Is you mean the world to me
Copyright ©
xsitm
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2005-07-26 07:41:01]
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Re: My girl
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by Sir_Odd87 on
Tuesday, 26th July 2005 @ 08:55:56 AM AEST
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| Good for you, man... Well written, and I'm glad you've found her. |
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Re: My girl
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by blowfish_jane on
Tuesday, 26th July 2005 @ 11:12:31 AM AEST
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This was just so sweet, good for you to find the one.
Thanks for sharing
Jane~
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Re: My girl
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 26th July 2005 @ 10:26:53 PM AEST
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| Very sweet I bet shes going to like it alot. Great write, and good luck with your girl. |
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