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With All Due Respect, Sir
Contributed by
sir_odd87
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Tuesday, 26th July 2005 @ 08:53:31 AM in AEST
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With all due respect, "Sir"
I can't stand you in the least,
Your tactics and your people skills,
Are worse than any beast's
You rant and rave
About what you do not understand
And in any argument,
The last word is always in your hand.
You abuse those you should nurture,
You force them to do your will,
When I think of how you treat them,
The whole thing makes me ill.
I love one of your servants,
And I've seen the way you treat her.
And I with the mental anguish that you cause,
She'd be better off if you BEAT her.
I've seen you breaking promises,
That would be so easy to keep.
And you jump down her throat and ground her,
If she complains with the smallest peep.
She contemplates her own demise,
Because you make her feel so wrong.
I can't imagine how she could
Have put up with you this long.
I'm going to tell you something, "Sir"
And this might drive you nuts.
But this thing I want to tell you,
Is I hate your living guts!
Copyright ©
sir_odd87
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2005-07-26 08:53:31]
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Re: With All Due Respect, Sir
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by ForeverAndADay on
Tuesday, 26th July 2005 @ 10:41:27 AM AEST
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| I like it. It's very emotional . Well done. |
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Re: With All Due Respect, Sir
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by seci on
Tuesday, 26th July 2005 @ 12:48:09 PM AEST
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i like this poem. and don't we all go through this every once and a while. i like.
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Re: With All Due Respect, Sir
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 26th July 2005 @ 03:12:25 PM AEST
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this struck a cord very nicely expressed and sad at the same time its hard to see things happen to people near us like this.
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Re: With All Due Respect, Sir
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 26th July 2005 @ 10:42:28 PM AEST
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Wow !!!!! Great expression ! I love how you get your point across in this write,
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Re: With All Due Respect, Sir
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 26th July 2005 @ 10:46:15 PM AEST
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| from what I got from the poem it sounds like you love this girl but her father or some authority over her treets her poorly im sorry and hope the best for her and Great write and sometimes when you mad its best to write it out. -Becca- |
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Re: With All Due Respect, Sir
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by juliette on
Tuesday, 26th July 2005 @ 11:28:47 PM AEST
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It really does suck when you love somone and have to watch idly as they are mistreated. I say you print this poem, sign it anonymous, seal it in a pretty envelope and mail it to him! Great write!
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Re: With All Due Respect, Sir
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 08:43:55 AM AEST
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| I for one, don't think it should be sent....it could make things much, much worse for her...no matter how bad things are now. |
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Re: With All Due Respect, Sir
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by Sir_Odd87 on
Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 11:30:17 PM AEST
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| I agree with Myst on this one, for sure... Let's just say that sending it anon wouldn't exactly multiply this fellow's options for suspects. And I don't think that me sending the father of the love of my life hate mail would increase my chances of getting to spend more time with her... |
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Re: With All Due Respect, Sir
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Wednesday, 5th April 2006 @ 11:28:37 AM AEST
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I liked this poem.. again it shows that you really care about this girl and how what her father does bothers you alot.. This tells me that you really love her..
take care
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