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The Day You Return
Contributed by
fancyface4898
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Saturday, 11th January 2003 @ 11:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I look into your eyes
Your gaze begins to hypnotize
The love we feel is real
My pain has begun to heal
Our time apart is over
Once again you are my lover
You have once again brought happiness to my life
I am so happy to say I am your wife.
Thank you for loving me
For I will forever love thee
God will bring you home
I cant wait for that day to come
To be in your arms
Safe from harm
That will be the greatest gift I could ever get.
My darling I hope god keeps you safe till you return
Written By:
Laura M. Whidden
Copyright ©
fancyface4898
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2003-01-11 23:40:00]
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Re: The Day You Return
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by FireStorm12 on
Sunday, 12th January 2003 @ 12:51:29 AM AEST
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| Very nice!!!!!!!...My wife has left me and I would love her to feel that way about me again. I would say that your husband is a very lucky man and should count his blessings every day to have your love. Tell him he should NEVER take your love for granted...nor should you take his for granted. I hope you have a happy reunion and a great marriage |
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Re: The Day You Return
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by fancyface4898 on
Sunday, 12th January 2003 @ 01:10:16 AM AEST
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We don't take each other for granted. We know how special love is and how special we are to each other. I just want him home.
He is over there doing his job and no matter how long it takes I will be right here waiting for him |
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Re: The Day You Return
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by Fwog on
Sunday, 12th January 2003 @ 04:52:59 AM AEST
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This is so romantic Laura, and I wish for you and every other soldiers loved ones that they all return safely to loving arms.
A good write.
Hugz
Dallas
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Re: The Day You Return
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by fancyface4898 on
Sunday, 12th January 2003 @ 01:27:13 PM AEST
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| Thank you Dal. I write from the heart and with faith and prayer I know he will come home to me safe |
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Re: The Day You Return
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by OreO on
Sunday, 12th January 2003 @ 04:30:37 PM AEST
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Laura as you know my thoughts are with you, and i do hope he doesn't have to be gone away for to long....i know as time goes by it will get harder for you just know i am here if you need to talk....you know that...sometimes it taks me a while to comment but i will get there lol....took me long enough aye?? lol..grrr ...ok nuff said....you write beautiful girl dont ever stop writing....as poetry should surely be a way for you to release so many feelings.....i enjoy reading you....
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Re: The Day You Return
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by fancyface4898 on
Sunday, 12th January 2003 @ 07:00:33 PM AEST
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| THank you I am glad you liked and some people say that they could be back in a little as 3 months. I so hope they are right. THank you for the inspiring words of hope |
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Re: The Day You Return
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by Panther_1978 on
Saturday, 25th January 2003 @ 04:03:36 AM AEST
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How very romantic... I hope he does get home soon..... Good write Laura!
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Re: The Day You Return
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by fancyface4898 on
Sunday, 26th January 2003 @ 02:27:59 AM AEST
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| Awe thank you I am glad you liked it :) |
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Re: The Day You Return
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by XXXsilvervoodooXXX on
Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 11:48:01 AM AEST
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| real good.. |
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