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offensive language
Contributed by
blackholesun
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Wednesday, 27th July 2005 @ 12:33:18 AM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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say what you want ,
tease and taunt,
rant and rave,i have not a care,
your anger i dont bear,
you cant make me sad,
you dont got the right,
push me i wont fight,
i will stand and turn my other cheek,
im not so weak,
i have a big heart,
and nothing you can say will tear it apart.
Copyright ©
blackholesun
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2005-07-27 00:33:18]
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Re: offensive language
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by Brandyx7 on
Wednesday, 27th July 2005 @ 12:37:21 AM AEST
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| Very good.. I only see one problem and it gramtical.. so, it isn't too bad.. all "I's" are suppose to be capitalize... Other than that.. good write. |
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Re: offensive language
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by In_a_while on
Wednesday, 27th July 2005 @ 06:49:01 PM AEST
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it's very inspirational and teeming with individuality. i like it
very nice, keep it up
dw |
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Re: offensive language
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by tommylover on
Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 04:09:37 PM AEST
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Re: offensive language
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by tommylover on
Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 04:30:13 PM AEST
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