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Lonley Night, Dieing Night
Contributed by
cooley1818
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Wednesday, 27th July 2005 @ 09:16:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Tonight i'll hear the whispers
tonight i'll hear the cry
tonight i'll sit here wondering
why you ever said goodbye
i'll fret for all your anger
i'll fret for all your pain
but never will i allow
for your feelings to sustain
tonight i will express
every emotion that i fear
then chase away the pain
when i feel your presence near
i cannot help but to wonder
what feelings you had to bare
then the times i'd look back
and see things were never fair
but this night remains to be lonley
and the night remains to be dead
this night the words you spoke
will cycle throughout my head
so tonight you'll hear my whispers
tonight you'll hear my cry
tonight you'll be wondering
why you ever said goodbye.......
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cooley1818
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2005-07-27 09:16:07]
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Re: Lonley Night, Dieing Night
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by frmpoison2static on
Wednesday, 27th July 2005 @ 10:26:11 AM AEST
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| nice poem...i could def. relate to it..as matter of fact its kind of what i feel like now... my gf of 1 and a half years broke up with me 2 days ago. keep writing. |
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Re: Lonley Night, Dieing Night
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by Brandyx7 on
Wednesday, 27th July 2005 @ 12:02:52 PM AEST
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| Yeah, breakups are hard, they consist of a lot of drama, broken hearts.. and a lot of confused feelings.. that only time can heal. |
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Re: Lonley Night, Dieing Night
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by lostinmyself on
Wednesday, 27th July 2005 @ 12:05:38 PM AEST
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That's really sad.
It's terrible that a lot of people take for granted what they do have, You're right. No one ever realizes what they have got till it's gone.
The poem is good. You have some spelling mistakes (Lonely), but the flow is good, and the words work well.
A good write,
*hugs* Phil xxx |
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Re: Lonley Night, Dieing Night
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by Justintears on
Wednesday, 27th July 2005 @ 09:07:51 PM AEST
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The memories that keep on burning our minds again and again. Well done. Keep the hope alive...
~justin~ |
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Re: Lonley Night, Dieing Night
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by Naughtygurl on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 10:38:45 AM AEST
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my boyfriend ( ex boyrfriend) broke up with me like at the end of school year, but he's a ******* and I just realized that i never loved him , I found someon i loved more .. so honestly breakups suk but sometimes they happen and things happen for a reason..
~~britt
(Edited due to the use of a banned word. - Moderator_16) |
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Re: Lonley Night, Dieing Night
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by emystar on
Monday, 1st August 2011 @ 01:50:28 AM AEST
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| Fantastic. |
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