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~This Life~
Contributed by
capergirl_23
on
Sunday, 12th January 2003 @ 01:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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~Distances between us,
a mean to no end.
~Apart from reality,
A daydream will lend.
~Sunshine through this grey cloud,
& rain drops on dew.
~Will this sunrise,
Bring us something to new?
~Tilted head & outstretched hand,
Large grins show his jagged teeth.
~Music rises from the band.
Words slowly rise out from
~his mouth, through the air,
unbroken & untouched,
~by his meaningless words.
Will they continue to fall on deaf ears?
~And never be heard, nor touched.
Will the homeless remain unsheltered?
~Will the young continue to die?
Will happiness always be filtered
~By others' sorrows, fears,
& nightmares of yester year?
~Will the dying have no hope?
Will the living cease to live?
~Where have all our dreams disappeared to?
Is the only world of love, trust, faith & hope
~consist of that little place where we run rampant to?
To that little place far back in our mind...
~Where we tell ourselves that everything
is ok??
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2003-01-12 01:20:00]
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Re: ~This Life~
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by mckayla on
Tuesday, 14th January 2003 @ 08:18:28 PM AEST
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| your poem explains how you feel. it makes a person think. it was great to read.It shows how much you really care about whats around you. There should be more people that should look at the reality of life as you do. |
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Re: ~This Life~
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by Feelin_Like_A_SadFellow on
Tuesday, 29th April 2003 @ 09:46:12 PM AEST
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if everyone took a moment to ask these questions to themselves i think we would be in trouble... when i ask mysefl these questions i get depressed... the poem itself is a great write
-Sid |
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