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My darkness
Contributed by
Adrianna
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Wednesday, 27th July 2005 @ 07:02:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Sometimes I just want to die inside I want to sit in the same dark room and die
I dont want people to see what Ive become I want to hide from my past and never turn back
I want the things that happened to disappear from my memory and never come back Maybe then I wouldnt hurt so bad
Sometimes I just want to die inside I want to sit in the same dark room and never come out
I want to go back to the past For everyone to be happy again
I just want to sit in the same dark room and die
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Adrianna
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2005-07-27 19:02:14] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: My darkness
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Wednesday, 27th July 2005 @ 08:15:44 PM AEST (User
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nicely expressed just so darn sad. NO you cant sit in a room and die though you feel like it. Pick yourself up and get outside into the sunshine and nature it will do wonders for your soul. Learn from the past but dont live in it my dear we cant always erase every bad moment from our mind but time heals the hurts of long ago. Believe me these things I know. hang in there!
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Re: My darkness
(User Rating: 1 ) by AshRayne on
Wednesday, 10th August 2005 @ 12:57:19 PM AEST (User
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don't be afraid to show the people who hurt you what affects they have caused. try to see the light in things, and dont be afraid to come out of your dark room. keep up with the writin buisness, my friend.
Exquisite writing that is your gift, be blessed, for you are perfection.
~Ash |
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