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Fading Memories
Contributed by
creed
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Wednesday, 27th July 2005 @ 11:10:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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We're not so different
You think just like I do
but that didnt seem to matter.
No more good times
No more me walking into a room of people
with nothing but a blanket on.
Just me sitting in my chair
writing another stupid poem
about my broken heart.
All I want now is for you to come back home
You dont have to date me,
though it would make me smile alot more.
I just want to see you smile
see you laugh.
I just want to have more good times with you.
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creed
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2005-07-27 23:10:04]
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Re: Fading Memories
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by emystar on
Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 06:53:09 AM AEST
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A bit sad but great writing.
huggs,
emy
u haven't lost your touch. |
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Re: Fading Memories
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by In_a_while on
Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 12:37:21 PM AEST
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That sounded sad but hopeful for the better times.. which is a good thing. the poem was very good.
keep it up
dW |
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Re: Fading Memories
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by TaintedOptomist on
Monday, 19th December 2005 @ 01:03:12 AM AEST
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| heh heh those were some good times we'll make some more just not like that. give me time and i'll be home to try this friends thing again. cheer up blood flower it's not all bad. |
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