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Run Away
Contributed by
blue_angel
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Wednesday, 27th July 2005 @ 11:19:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Im but a soul trapped in forever
You ask for my name but I cant remember
Carelessness fills my eyes and my heart
This pain I endure slowly tears me apart
Fifteen and going on extinct
You say I am strong but its not what I think
I am way past point of no return
And through these tears I crash and burn
My life portrayed through broken glass
Shattered and scattered it does not last
One cannot cope with a shadowed soul
Closed in and burned out I remain cold
Pick up my feet and run from this place
The cruelties of life I cannot face
Screaming again you hear not what I say
Wipe away tears I must run away
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Re: Run Away
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by emystar on
Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 01:41:05 AM AEST
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So sad yet a masterpeice.
I think we can all relate to this. That is if a person is honest with themselves.
I feel that organized religion makes one feel useless and very un importent in life. Not all of them but many.
Not just religion but abusive people try very hard to make one feel this way. Very good writing so please hang in there.
luv, huggs, prayer,
emy |
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Re: Run Away
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by AnaBanana on
Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 03:24:24 PM AEST
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| nice rhyming! |
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Re: Run Away
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Friday, 19th August 2005 @ 09:22:44 PM AEST
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A true masterpiece blended with sadness and pain. Hang tuff friend and stand tall. You will overcome the obstacles in ur life.
Otherwise a touching very well written poem.
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