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dance the night away
Contributed by
socialmisfit
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Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 03:42:00 AM in AEST
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forget i exist
kiss tonight goodbye
and my dreamless heart means nothing
i shall cast that stone to the aching sky
pray i shatter the night, and let lose the stars
to fall and burn this life away
only then will you understand
i am empty
and so i dance
in my starlight serenade
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Re: dance the night away
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by venkat on
Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 04:35:58 AM AEST
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Awww..this is marvellous..."i shall cast that stone to the aching sky.. i shatter the night, and let lose the stars..to fall and burn this life away"..such powerful imagination is rarely seen on this site....venkat
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Re: dance the night away
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by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 04:36:26 AM AEST
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Ahhh makes perfect sense to me...sounds like warning someone from falling in love with you...because you're empty of emotion and will only hurt them in the long run...That's what I make of it anyway...*shrug* I really enjoyed this, and your expression was deep for so few lines...LOVE this:
"I shall cast that stone to the aching sky
pray I shatter the night, and let loose the stars
to fall and burn this life away..."
Well done, and welcome back : )
Scorp. |
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Re: dance the night away
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by lostrelic on
Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 04:53:15 AM AEST
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| its a lovely write and i am happy to read it i hope it isnt what scorpion said everyone needs love (this from the guy who lives a sheltered life) but i hope to see somemore |
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Re: dance the night away
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by emystar on
Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 06:48:43 AM AEST
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Awesome.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: dance the night away
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by Adrianna on
Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 09:38:45 AM AEST
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| I love it. I think I do understand how you are feeling. |
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Re: dance the night away
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by gwenevere on
Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 05:22:59 PM AEST
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| Great imagery.We all understand your wonderful words, Ros |
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Re: dance the night away
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by the_Ghost_Moth on
Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 09:38:33 AM AEST
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Good stuff.
and my dreamless heart means nothing
i shall cast that stone to the aching sky
pray i shatter the night, and let lose the stars
to fall and burn this life away
Very inspired and exciting.
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