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Death of him
Contributed by
Beni
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Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 01:39:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Feel so lost in this life,
So many roads to take,
To grab the knife,
Seems a good decision to make.
Feeling afraid to be forsaken,
Thinking what people would do,
If my life were to be taken,
But I just want to be with you.
Seeing you that day,
Being buried six feet under,
I didnt think I would see you that way,
And is it a wonder?
I saw you every week,
And to find you had died,
Made me want to seek,
What you had to hide.
Why you did that,
I still dont know,
I visit the bench where you sat,
Why do I miss you so?
Copyright ©
Beni
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2005-07-28 13:39:36]
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Re: Death of him
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by gabby521 on
Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 02:29:09 PM AEST
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| I'm sorry for your loss. The way you expressed your sorrow over death and your loss of desire to live is very sad, yet brilliantly said in this piece. |
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Re: Death of him
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by Sexi_Lexi on
Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 02:34:12 PM AEST
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Awwwwwwwww! That us such a cute poem? Who died bex?
Luv ya always xxxxx |
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Re: Death of him
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by Kie-Kie on
Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 03:51:11 PM AEST
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I'm so sorry for your loss... I know what that feels like... I loves someone and they passed in February... but death isn't the answer... it's not what they would want for you... I'm here if you need to talk to someone
Great poem!!!
Love ya,
~Kiela~ |
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