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Tha Knight and The Sword
Contributed by
gwenevere
on
Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 02:52:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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See the lake so calm and still
Shimmering beneath the hill
Galiant soldier, handsome knight
Sat astride his stallion white
Dismounting slowly, no one hears
She slowly smiles and wipes her tears
Here he is, the one , at last
Here to do his chosen task
Waters murmur, soft and clear
Ripples of music gently cheer
He walks to the waters edge
Life, allegience, he will pledge
Silver fingers, soft and long
Reaching out to knight so strong
Sword in hand, she flies so high
Onwards, upwards to the sky
Keeper of the sword now finds
Man in armour, strong and kind
Takes the sword, a legend found
Kneels in obedience on the ground
Off to Camelot, he will go
Hills and valley's, high and low
To a table of the round
Lancelot, there he'll be found
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Re: Tha Knight and The Sword
(User Rating: 1 )
by Kie-Kie on
Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 03:42:04 PM AEST
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*smiles* I just love the old Camelot stories and medieval lore...
This is a great poem the story it tells is wonderful...
Keep me posted if there's a sequal :D
Love ya,
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Re: Tha Knight and The Sword
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by xxbreathlessx on
Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 03:43:07 PM AEST
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| i really like the imagery and how you take us through the scene. GREat write! and it flows sooo well too! The first stanza really draws the reader in, |
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Re: Tha Knight and The Sword
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by Man_On_High on
Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 10:16:44 PM AEST
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a magnificent tale of ancient royalty..
and written to perfection Ros..again-
I love this..
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