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trapped
Contributed by
jen54
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Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 04:13:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I am trapped
In hate
I am trapped
In pain
I am trapped
In despair
I am trapped
In lies
I am trapped
In anger
I am trapped
In confusion
No one knows I am
Cause Im trapped
In silence
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jen54
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2005-07-28 16:13:04]
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Re: trapped
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by kaosar on
Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 05:58:31 PM AEST
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| I have something that I strongly believe in and I really hope you may find it useful for you too: no one can ever help you if you don't start helping yourself.. no one can ever change your situation if you don't start by changing yourself.. take a good care .. |
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Re: trapped
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by rockergirl94 on
Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 06:35:27 PM AEST
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I love your poem. Especially the ending, it just ties it together so well. It's hard-hitting and sticks in my mind. Great job getting your point across.
- Julie |
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Re: trapped
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by Randyjohnson on
Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 06:58:26 PM AEST
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| I hope that things get better for you. |
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Re: trapped
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 02:38:36 AM AEST
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| Jennifer, that is a great little poem. Sad and very well expressed. |
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Re: trapped
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by Tiffyo4 on
Wednesday, 19th April 2006 @ 07:49:25 PM AEST
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very nice poem but your not trapped anymore
love Tiff |
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Re: trapped
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by Trisha on
Tuesday, 13th June 2006 @ 09:47:32 PM AEST
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| I Hope Your Not Trapped Anymore |
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