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merciful freedom
Contributed by
xXxmegsxXx
on
Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 04:40:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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i'm just too tired
to struggle on
this endless battle
cannot be won
all the time i can feel
my soul slipping away
the shadows are swollowing the light
each and every ray
the end is coming now
soon my broken heart will still
a flowing river of blood
from my wrists do spill
red rode petals fall
gathering on the floor
soon the river will dry up
and sadness will be no more
my body goes numb
as coldness sweeps over me
my breath is extingushed
as finally, i'm set free
Copyright ©
xXxmegsxXx
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2005-07-28 16:40:31]
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Re: merciful freedom
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 05:44:31 PM AEST
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| A flowing write. Christopher. |
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Re: merciful freedom
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by Dark-one on
Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 02:23:10 AM AEST
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| very moving, keep it up |
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Re: merciful freedom
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by guiltycircles on
Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 09:01:28 AM AEST
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| makes me speechless... |
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Re: merciful freedom
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by jemer on
Monday, 29th August 2005 @ 06:05:45 AM AEST
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| absolutly gobsmaking. stuck for words |
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