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He Asked, Tomorrow Answered
Contributed by
rockergirl94
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Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 06:19:49 PM in AEST
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As you painted yourself with lies
The lies of which you spoke of fondly
You gave up your heart for ransom
Convincing yourself youd never want it back
And I hope you were right
For the price of a heart can never be met.
You asked, Of what good is a heart
For it breaks, it shatters, and is stolen away
And I answered, Of what good are the heartless
For they are cold and have no soul
Watching a passing world with empty eyes
Knowing not the consequences of their actions
They partake in evil, and feel nothing
Partake in good deeds, gain nothing
How then is life any more fulfilling?
Indeed with the heart comes pain
But with the heartless comes nothing
Even a scream would be relief from the stillness
For those who have no purpose
And lay down among the dead
Whispering vacantly
I gain nothing, I feel nothing,
I have a heart shaped hole in me.
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Re: He Asked, Tomorrow Answered
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by Urizen on
Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 07:15:50 PM AEST
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| Beautiful poem, it actualluy contains a very strong message of hope, it's certainly a poem that gets better with every read. thanks for sharing. |
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Re: He Asked, Tomorrow Answered
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by juliette on
Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 08:02:05 PM AEST
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You have touched on an amazing concept here, and I absolutely love that last line! Powerful stuff! Very real emotionally - always makes for a good write!
Thabks for sharing!
juliette
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Re: He Asked, Tomorrow Answered
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 08:38:25 PM AEST
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| Superb write on many levels!! Chris. |
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Re: He Asked, Tomorrow Answered
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by Erualaitalmarea on
Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 11:32:24 AM AEST
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| very true...nice to know someone else feels the same...good write |
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