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Words
Contributed by
Misunderstood_gurl
on
Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 08:04:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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She was just a girl
A girl who has lost her way
I love you
Are the simple words she was longing for someone to say
But no one did
Because they didnt care
I hate you
Are the brutal words that she couldnt bare
Even though it hurt
Those words she couldnt bare
Would get stuck in her head
And would just stay there
She never heard words of
Passion, caring, or affection
But words of
Hurt, pain, and rejection
No one ever loved her
Or helped her with her pain
So, gradually as she grew
She was considered insane
Until, finally she realized
She didnt deserve to live this life
So she turned to her best friend
Silver, her knife
She laid down her knife
Upon her wrist on a vein
She did one deep, long slice
And the last thing she felt was pain
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2005-07-28 20:04:20]
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Re: Words
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 02:12:19 PM AEST
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| I liked this poem, it was very emotional, sometimes hate can be one of the strongest words in the world, usually people say it out of anger, sometimes they do not mean it. SLipSiX. |
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Re: Words
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by AnaBanana on
Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 11:33:58 PM AEST
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| aww thats sad... |
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Re: Words
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by sprinter27 on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 10:33:36 PM AEST
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good, sad, and powerful write. good job, and if 'she' is really 'you' please, don't do it. i know the pain of rejection and hurt and not of love and care. and i'm still living... please don't hurt yourself. it's not worth it. we have to stick together... good write, though. keep up the good work!
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Re: Words
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by Kamal on
Friday, 9th December 2005 @ 11:14:48 AM AEST
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Hey you
That was deep I really like the way you worded your write.. at the end I knew what was going to happen but its your wordiness I like...
Please continue....
She laid down her knife
Upon her wrist on a vein
She did one deep, long slice
And the last thing she felt was pain
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