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Goodbye Kiss
Contributed by
cooley1818
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Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 10:15:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I can remember the look
a cold look of confusion
with a stiff soft stare
and the thoughts of delusion
i loved you so much
but you weren't quite sure
i thought you felt the same
but the feelings weren't pure
its been 9 months
and my feelings are the same
i'm lost in despiration
i'm sickened from the pain
i had to kiss you
the day you came out
with the intensions of love
but with a mind in doubt
its the last time i kissed you
it will be the last time you'll cry
if only i had knew
that kiss ment goodbye
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2005-07-28 22:15:42]
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Re: Goodbye Kiss
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by brokenwings on
Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 01:09:17 AM AEST
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good bye is often hardest to say, but we all get through it, we just have to have faith, but you wrote it well,
smile
tasha |
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Re: Goodbye Kiss
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 04:38:50 AM AEST
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| This was a beautifull poem, I believe goodbye is one of the hardest things you could ever say to a person especially if they are your family, your friend, or somebody you have known your entire life, you sit and think to yourself wow, I can not believe this person is actually going away for good, I might not ever be able to see them again, when I think of this tears come to my eyes, two of my best friends have left, we have had some good times, but that is what you try to do, you try to remember the good times you had with them, good bye is usually one of the hardest things to say to a person, this was a beautifull insiring write, I loved it. SLipSiX. |
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Re: Goodbye Kiss
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by solosoul on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 03:21:31 PM AEST
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| very nice poem i guess everyone can relate even the ones that havent been threw it somehow know that feeling or fear whatever is the situation. |
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Re: Goodbye Kiss
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by Naughtygurl on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 08:14:41 PM AEST
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| i think that makes me so friggan sad ... Sum1 just told me this long story bout sumthin that completly relates to that poem and i want to cry so bad cuz imagining there pain aww it sux i loved this write i'm sorry that it happened like that |
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Re: Goodbye Kiss
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by Ambivalence on
Friday, 10th October 2008 @ 09:10:28 PM AEST
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such a sad/sorrowful write. indeed, past feelings seem ever so present. but dont giv up so easily, sometimes goodbyes truly mean "We will see each other again." take care
-K.Z.
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Re: Goodbye Kiss
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by emystar on
Monday, 1st August 2011 @ 01:53:47 AM AEST
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| I'm still here. your writing has me mezmerisedddddd' |
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