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This Time
Contributed by
xoblondiebabix3
on
Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 10:50:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I know that it was hard before The complication, you said no more I know I was scared, constantly Would lie, would escape, just to be free
This time will be different Ill show you who I am I wont let the darkness inside Bring the worst in what I am
No more drinking, hidden signs No more confusion, or on my arms red lines No more hiding, no more black I know deep inside, you want me back
This time will be different Everything seen previously Will escape but collide Into the real me The happy me, one you can trust Without a lie, or secret youll bust
No more excuses, I wont complain Ill hold my head high, no more pain I wont be obsessive, no more deep talks No open heart, for now it locks
This time will be different This time, this time Maybe one day, Ill call you mine Though it may not be possible, nor true I have to do this for myself And not for you
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Re: This Time
(User Rating: 1 ) by dreamer_4_eternity on
Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 12:48:41 AM AEST (User
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This was really touching, and it made me cry, I can't tell you why or which part but it did, and that's hard to do, so congratulations, maybe it's just like this because I can relate it a lot to myself and things in my life currently, but thank you so much for posting this, I needed to read it. |
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Re: This Time
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 02:03:34 PM AEST (User
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Yes yes haha, a very touching, beautifully, expressive, emotional poem I loved it, keep writing. SLipSiX. |
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Re: This Time
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Sunday, 11th March 2007 @ 05:23:29 PM AEST (User
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This is a very courageous poem! I wish I had your bravery! Excellent poem! |
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