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You Don't Know Me
Contributed by
jen54
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Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 07:21:56 PM in AEST
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You don't know me
You don't know the first thing about me
Like where I am writing this from
You have no power over me
Can you even guess what I look like
I don't think so
Better look deeper
My form is constantly changing
But there is one thing stays the same
My pain
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jen54
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Re: You Don't Know Me
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by PuppyChow on
Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 07:33:31 PM AEST
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| wow. instead of short and sweet, its short and sour. .. but well worded. liked it. sounds sorta rebellious. ;P keep it up. i liked how it doesnt rhyme or have stanzas. want to be an individual, eh? anyway, nice job. |
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Re: You Don't Know Me
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by juliette on
Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 08:13:10 PM AEST
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Sad but probably true, everything around us changes - and we do forget most things, except those that hurt. Great write! Thanks for sharing!
juliette |
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Re: You Don't Know Me
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by dreamer_4_eternity on
Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 08:37:00 PM AEST
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| Your pain doesn't have to always be there... it's SOO hard to let go, but somehow, we are sometimes able to... this was very original and a lot of people can relate, you did a good job writing this |
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Re: You Don't Know Me
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 08:40:46 PM AEST
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if i didnt understand you or even be trying to,than wht in the world im commenting huh?well,i totally understand u!!and this is so strong,and short,i liked it,its also true.keep it up.t/c.
love always,
andrea |
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Re: You Don't Know Me
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by justme03 on
Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 10:00:39 PM AEST
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wow
this sounds plagerized from a book i read
are u sure u wrote this?
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Re: You Don't Know Me
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by je2ica3 on
Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 10:32:49 PM AEST
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| good write |
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Re: You Don't Know Me
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 11:15:33 PM AEST
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| reminds me of a lot of my older poems, and it uses a lot of the same exact wording too. all i have to say it doesnt matter if anyone else knows you, it only matters if you know yourself. and ill tell you now, pain doesnt always stay the same, it intensifies, numbs, or even lessens, but its never the same. |
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Re: You Don't Know Me
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by Kie-Kie on
Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 11:15:36 PM AEST
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I'm sorry someone's hurt you this much...
but this poem reflects your anger and frustration well..
Love ya,
~Kiela~
(who's here if you need her) |
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Re: You Don't Know Me
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by AnaBanana on
Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 11:19:26 PM AEST
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| this is good, i can relate |
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Re: You Don't Know Me
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by vibes2go on
Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 03:33:42 AM AEST
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| I guess pain is a constant .. I enjoyed the read |
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Re: You Don't Know Me
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by Archie on
Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 06:53:49 PM AEST
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| No i don't know you, but, do you want to be known? Great write. |
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Re: You Don't Know Me
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 5th September 2005 @ 12:11:19 PM AEST
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This is agreat write Jennifer. :) It is sad but that is what poetry is all about. Keep it up.
:)
Tim
I think I know you a little :) I know you have a sweet heart and a big heart and that you are a very nice person. |
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Re: You Don't Know Me
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by emphaticplacebo on
Tuesday, 20th September 2005 @ 07:55:44 AM AEST
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This is a really nice write, Jen. You are quick to the point and maintain that point throughout.
Well worded and a nice flow, I certainly look forward to reading more |
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Re: You Don't Know Me
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by no_1nos_me on
Thursday, 30th March 2006 @ 04:12:46 PM AEST
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| Well i don't have guess what you look like but your writings give your mental imag |
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Re: You Don't Know Me
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by Tiffyo4 on
Thursday, 30th March 2006 @ 05:55:53 PM AEST
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well i would hope that your hott no just kidding very nice work
tiff |
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Re: You Don't Know Me
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Monday, 10th April 2006 @ 10:44:29 AM AEST
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great poem.. I liked it
take care
christina |
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Re: You Don't Know Me
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by k2kdesigner on
Monday, 15th May 2006 @ 10:27:27 AM AEST
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OMG I love this poem--straight to point very well done...keep it up I wanna read more
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Re: You Don't Know Me
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by Trisha on
Tuesday, 13th June 2006 @ 09:46:33 PM AEST
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| Thats Right Tell Them Like It Is |
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