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it was an accident
Contributed by
je2ica3
on
Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 10:51:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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i never thought you would hit me.
i mean youve slapped me but never that hard.
i didnt think you would punch me well thats how it felt.
i never thought youde make me cry.
atleast not that hard.
i trusted you so much and loved you so dearly.
i never meant to make you cry cause i now it was an accident well thats what were gonna call it.
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Re: it was an accident
(User Rating: 1 )
by AnaBanana on
Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 11:11:43 PM AEST
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| i really like this poem...a lot of my poems have this theme, though not all of them are on here. nice work |
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Re: it was an accident
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by vibes2go on
Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 03:36:43 AM AEST
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| Interesting theme .. could use some work on the punctuation..but I really liked the ending. |
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