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Love At Last
Contributed by
o7neves
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Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 02:17:41 AM in AEST
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Just when I think I know your every move
You come and surprise me with something new
I didnt know how affectionate you could be
I know I havent seen all there is to see
I know well argue what couple doesnt
In a healthy relationship its a key component
Well laugh, well cry, and love, and dance
But most importantly well take the chance
We both cant wait to see each other
And I dont want you to love another
I want to spend my life with you
Growing old until one hundred and two
Raising our kids in a house of our own
Thats what I think about when I smell your cologne
Youre playing with our son while Im washing the dishes
Thanking the man above for granting my wishes
You put the kids to sleep while I slip into a teddy
Then you come join me cuz were hot and heavy
Time flies by because we have so much fun
And before you know it were all done
Copyright ﾂｩ
o7neves
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2005-07-30 02:17:41]
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Re: Love At Last
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by Vampirequeen on
Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 02:50:48 AM AEST
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lol awwwwww
good write.i dont know what else to say lol |
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Re: Love At Last
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by vibes2go on
Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 03:53:27 AM AEST
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We値l laugh, we値l cry, and love, and dance
But most importantly we値l take the chance
should be lyrics ....great!!! |
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Re: Love At Last
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by Kie-Kie on
Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 04:37:11 AM AEST
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That's beautiful... I hope they know what they mean to you
wonderful poem
love ya,
~Kiela~ |
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Re: Love At Last
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by gwenevere on
Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 05:24:24 AM AEST
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| Love, it's a wonderful thing.Lovely, heartwarming write, Ros |
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Re: Love At Last
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by CurtisC on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 09:58:47 PM AEST
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| i loved it..i got such a nice picture in my mind when you were describing the family you see yourself having, you will definitely be a wonderful mother someday. Great job once again, keep em comin |
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Re: Love At Last
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 02:34:12 AM AEST
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Aww I love this poem! Its cute and towards then end Its funny. This is a really Great Write!!
I really enjoyed this part...
I know we値l argue what couple doesn稚
In a healthy relationship it痴 a key component
We値l laugh, we値l cry, and love, and dance
But most importantly we値l take the chance
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