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Triple X Write
Contributed by
Man_On_High
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Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 05:03:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Your body like a flower,
my rose.. open in full bloom-
turning, twisting..
seeking the sun and light
that would give you life.
You arch your back to meet me
and try to breathe but you cannot..
I've taken it all away
in a moment of passion
unsurpassed by any other.
Time has stopped-
there is nothing else
no-one else but us exist,
wrapped together as one.
You whimper as I bite..
then kiss.. cool with my breath
as I push your limit.. your thresholds..
so slow.. so painfully slow..
walking that fine line where pain and pleasure
become one..
and you cry out.. grabbing what you can-
your peaks and valleys now a fever
in a frezied lust-
((you shake uncontrollably))
moving about you..
covering in a flurry of sucks and kisses,
everything you.
Warm breath moves by your ear.. nibbling-
I whisper.. 'I love you~ '
our eyes meet momentarily..
-the love is in this moment-
Here in the dark,
you become possesed...
the liquid of my species.
Your skin, gleaming white.. inviting
and wet with passion...
a molten display of flesh.. all woman.
Your body is liquid to my words,
a mass of swirling, thickened life
changing form at my touch
as I trace a path along your body
searching for the road home.
Burned is a trail of desire
through your soul...
heat rising from your depths-
lost whispers... surreal-
touching.. milking your flesh..
my body ACHES as it feeds!
My soul, hungrily devouring yours..
becoming one..
For I am your savior tonight
and I crawl into you...
turning your flesh inside out-
I fill you completely and you are soaked
with the forbidden pleasure of it-
Heat builds,
strokes lengthen...
desperate movements..
Suddenly from within our depths,
we explode
in a blinding pleasure!!
a release.. a flood..
a mind-blowing detonation-
squeezing me tight in your vise, you moan..
l o n g and deep..
as everything goes black...
B
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Re: Triple X Write
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by gwenevere on
Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 05:44:59 AM AEST
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Blimey!!!!!!!!!!! Cold shower here I come!!!!!
This was absolutely amazing.You must have a wonderful partner or a wonderful imagination.This was so different for you and it worked. Well done, Ros |
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Re: Triple X Write
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by vibes2go on
Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 05:49:41 AM AEST
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| what kind of flower? |
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Re: Triple X Write
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by Bruce on
Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 09:22:55 AM AEST
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| All I can say is FANTASTIC |
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Re: Triple X Write
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by the_Ghost_Moth on
Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 10:55:23 AM AEST
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Where can I get the video?
;)
Here in the dark,
you become possesed...
the liquid of my species.
Your skin, gleaming white.. inviting
and wet with passion...
a molten display of flesh.. all woman.
Great stanza.
--Ghosty |
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Re: Triple X Write
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 11:35:07 AM AEST
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Damn! ~fans face ~ This is a very erotic and moving write. I love it . I love every stanza ,but the ninth verse **Burned is a trail desire through your soul...** amazing !! I need a cigarette and I dont even smoke !!!!
Leia36 |
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Re: Triple X Write
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 01:11:11 PM AEST
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Beautiful rennisance poet bill nothing like a rennisance nude painting to spice up a gallery, well done . . .
Ben |
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Re: Triple X Write
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by Lancaster on
Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 01:17:15 PM AEST
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just simply amazing
you really know how to tell a story
you convey such depth in a an act most people take for granted as theirs alone
Beutiful in every sense of the word
you have outdone yourself here
awesome
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Re: Triple X Write
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by CarolinaBlue on
Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 01:40:35 PM AEST
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Wow Billy, (fanning myself and smoking a cigarette) this was quite a hot and steamy write, but the way it was written with such artistry and natural "flow" leaves me perfectly content having reached the end. Great write, my friend, very sensual.
~Blue~
(sparking up a second smoke and lingering awhile in the darkness) |
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Re: Triple X Write
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 02:56:40 PM AEST
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WooHoo!!!
Very sensual..... Tastefully done!!
Jenni |
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Re: Triple X Write
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by shelby on
Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 05:02:08 PM AEST
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fan fan I need a fan a HUGE fan Billy this is beyond steamy its full blown smoke and fire whewwwwwww incredible and very sensual tasteful well ok Im off for a cig and the hose
Michelle |
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Re: Triple X Write
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by blowfish_jane on
Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 05:29:57 PM AEST
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Ohh dear, that was one spicy and hot write.
I could just feel the romance bubbling at the great exlosion od the hot passion.
I need a bath a very cold one.
Jane xxx |
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Re: Triple X Write
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 01:25:08 AM AEST
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Holy hell!!!!!!! Billy.......(shocked!)
Wow, just wow.
This was amazing and just woahhh lol.
I like how you refer to her body as a flower, I thought that was beautifully written.
LOL...did you meet a lovely lady or something.
This was awesome!
Sensual and subliminal poetry.
U rock |
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Re: Triple X Write
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 06:45:42 AM AEST
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WOW!! This is the stuff dreams are made of! lol Very sensual and most definitely sexy....Woo Hoo Nancy...she's in for a treat! Nicely done Billy...you kept it classy.
Scorp. |
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Re: Triple X Write
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by brew on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 07:39:38 PM AEST
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Flowing of beautiful words...............To pic what one has written, and feel......Wonderful work Billy. You have a very creative side, as well as a side to make anyone wonder and want. Well done, and always a pleasure on reading the words.
Brew~ |
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Re: Triple X Write
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 09:09:56 PM AEST
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Ah u leave Dreamer speechless!
You've really outdone yourself with this one Billy. Such an imagination and such incredible artistry. You've definately got the fans working overtime with this one. You truly have an amazing creative side to u. Well done. It's always a pleasure to read ur remarkable work.
Hugs,
Dreamer |
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Re: Triple X Write
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by emystar on
Friday, 19th August 2005 @ 12:23:16 AM AEST
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Shew, hot, hot, hot.
big smiles,
emy |
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Re: Triple X Write
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by Lancaster on
Sunday, 21st August 2005 @ 09:27:14 PM AEST
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| i once wrote something like this...yours is just so much better....nice job....you must get alot of chicks..lol...just kiddin |
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