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look at me im happy!!!!
Contributed by
socialmisfit
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Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 05:13:33 AM in AEST
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many times i feel i have died inside
and have yet to be freed
but when i look at myself
i just don't see, why i would want to be
when something comes to mind
i feel i have given my best at this chance
but then i fall
and i have to wonder, and give my best a second glance
sometimes i try to love
sometimes i try and be strong
sometimes i wonder if its worth it
but most of the time i am just wrong
wrong wrong wrong,
always ***** wrong!!!!!
yea that's me.........
wrong is all im destined to be
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Re: look at me im happy!!!!
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by the_Ghost_Moth on
Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 10:45:31 AM AEST
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Very thoughtful write,
fearlessly sharing yourself with the reader.
Keep writing and developing your poetry.
--Ghost
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Re: look at me im happy!!!!
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by Vampirequeen on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 03:57:12 AM AEST
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its really nice that you express yourself so well.
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Re: look at me im happy!!!!
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 04:59:23 PM AEST
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Good expression in this write. You described your emotions well, and wrote this in such a way as to be relatable by many readers...Often it seems as though we aren't making any progress in life, but rest assured, we are and YOU are. So hang tight and keep fighting for what you believe in!
Nice job with this write.
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