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Young ones
Contributed by
mindset
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Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 05:33:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Through the eyes of then
We looked upon a world of begin
Unknowing a road of lie and true beginning
Every thought a way to create
All the word a shallow truth
As then a new day unfolds
So much we waiste and fade the day
A new place in our minds to recreate
A wise word swept under street
Listen and be the way not the say
Look at them with something to obey
What sounds the empty an only safety
Yet you only turn away
In life an answer comes
From asking the pure question
And what we listen an only rock an roll symbol
We change the day of every way
And with the lay we think we become men
Yet Nothin but the lonely stray
For the now I know should have stood
In awe and nothing but only respect
What you think now stand and bow
All the words and advise
Its only and always be the now
Copyright ©
mindset
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2005-07-30 17:33:01]
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Re: Young ones
(User Rating: 1 )
by Alibi on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 01:01:21 AM AEST
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| I don't know if I missed something but it seems as if this is either bad English or just a whole lot of nothing. I'm sorry if that comes across rude, but I couldn't make out hell or high water. |
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Re: Young ones
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by mindset on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 03:01:35 AM AEST
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| would your prefer twinkle twinkle little star :) |
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