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Watch
Contributed by
Naughtygurl
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Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 10:50:15 AM in AEST
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Wanna watch me cry?
Watch me bleed, don't stop
Can't stop now;
You'll miss me ,
But i wanna be your good girl
Wanna be the only pain in your life
Never have to let go
Goodbye
Wanna watch me fall,
and when I crawl you push me down
Pushed me until I pulled
Down ,Laying here on the ground
broken with all this pain
I Feel like i'm going insane
Don't want to be a good girl anymore.
Wanna die, but dont you cry for me .
You always threw me away
but I kept coming back
I never wanted anything
Your the one i'll never miss
I think you hate me, I hate you
These cuts bleed, now can you see
Watch me fall because i'm falling fast,
watch me bend until I break
Let me find my own way bak
Dont wanna be good because its fun being bad,
Watch me bleed tell me
can you see now ?
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Naughtygurl
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Re: Watch
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by cooley1818 on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 12:03:05 PM AEST
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wow, good write, very deep, alot of pain and anger built up, i hope this poem wasnt based on real actions, but it was great, i loved it
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Re: Watch
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by bethie on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 12:22:28 PM AEST
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| Very angry energy. I guess the positive side is that you've found a constructive outlet in poetry. Good write. |
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Re: Watch
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by Dusty on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 04:11:54 PM AEST
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Intense. It is almost like you are screaming your anger out through the words. VERY intense.
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Re: Watch
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by suicidal_imbecile on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 07:33:29 PM AEST
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man i feel bad reading this. its like a rant. right its a rant. its a good rant. rants are always good because there so angry. anger is like a disease. its burns, its smells, and it hurts. nice write
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Re: Watch
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by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 01:12:37 AM AEST
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very intense and sad write.
well done on this .
and thanks for commenting on my poems.
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Re: Watch
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by XxNights_ChildxX on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 09:48:39 PM AEST
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wow this is a great poem, very strong emotions here, I kinda know how u feel...I can relate :) n e ways great job!
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Re: Watch
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by remote on
Saturday, 10th September 2005 @ 03:21:17 PM AEST
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| Quite nice. |
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