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Selfish
Contributed by
bethie
on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 12:10:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Simple are the things
I need,
Few, the things
I want,
When you offered all of
your love
to me;
You gave more
than you
got.
Copyright ©
bethie
... [
2005-07-31 12:10:13]
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Re: Selfish
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 12:38:32 PM AEST
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| A write tinged with regret? Seems so. A nice simple piece. Christopher |
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Re: Selfish
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by Dusty on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 04:10:42 PM AEST
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Short and to the point. I like! Its great that in so few words you can convey such a feeling.
Dusty |
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Re: Selfish
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by xxbreathlessx on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 12:18:13 AM AEST
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| kind of sad, if you ask me. but you say so much with such few words. great job!! |
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Re: Selfish
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 07:30:48 PM AEST
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A very interesting poem this is, nice rhtymum
2 it along with the words, and most effective
in it's in your face presentation, i like the
no noncence manner in what u said, no
between the lines here . . .
Ben |
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Re: Selfish
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Thursday, 16th March 2006 @ 11:31:30 AM AEST
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this was really good. It was short and simple and to the point. A sort of regret or maybe not a fulfillment that you didn't give more then you had gotten.. well anyways great poem..
take care
christina |
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