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SWEET DREAMS
Contributed by
sweetoccasion29
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Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 01:09:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Matter of fact, this is no dream
reality laced with poison,
struggling to remain, taking
each day as it enters, gasping
for air dying to breathe
My moment of weakness, now
hours in the midst, bracing for your
touch, my dying wish, your closed fist
My reality I pray to descend,
to dream peaceful to no end
remains of your pleasure, torture
at its best, now to rest, my sweet
sleep, unlimited dreams begin
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Re: SWEET DREAMS
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by Saint_41 on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 01:26:00 PM AEST
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| good write |
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Re: SWEET DREAMS
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 02:32:06 PM AEST
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I have read this several times and I must say it is touching and moving poem!!! Well done,
Leia36
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Re: SWEET DREAMS
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by vibes2go on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 06:50:41 PM AEST
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| hmmm ... interesting .. I didn't get it really .. the closed fist part. |
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Re: SWEET DREAMS
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 07:36:01 PM AEST
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Beautiful in every way though i hope you are alright so very ambivelant in it's nature, well
done . . .
(((((souther belle)))))
Ben |
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Re: SWEET DREAMS
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by anitajames on
Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 12:34:16 PM AEST
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| i can relate to the great escape found in dreams. The one we can't love while awake... we can in our dreams, and he always loves us back, until we awake. |
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