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I can`t watch
Contributed by
gunda
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Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 08:01:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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I can`t stand here watching you fall apart
I can`t see your tears and pretend I don`t care
How should I respond when you say, Ill be gone soon?
Is there any way I can convince you, it isn`t true?
I know your mind is made up, that it all to soon will be true
But until that day has come
I am here for you
And we will make each other to see the present time
Not hide away in the past, but remember there is a future too
Copyright ©
gunda
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2005-07-31 20:01:41]
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Re: I can`t watch
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 08:36:38 PM AEST
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| This was a good write. It started off very emotional. Keep up the good work. |
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Re: I can`t watch
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by MorningDove on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 09:52:53 PM AEST
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It is actually a very lovely poem. I would not feel ashamed giving it to another poet.
Dove |
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Re: I can`t watch
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by vibes2go on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 11:09:37 PM AEST
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| No longer able to write myself .. I cannot give anyone else advice .. I was here and I read your work .. good job.. I read it through tears so if it's not good I wouldn't know really .. |
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