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The Search Goes On
Contributed by
lancaster
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Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 11:39:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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An alleged sacrifice that never comes to fruition
A claim of holy divide which never relies on basic intuition
Seek and you shall find, exactly what you claim is missing
Curiosity in time kills the restraining personal prison
Affliction of a powerless struggle for equilibrium
A balance of rain and snow sets the ice sheet in motion
The glacial prowess to slide undetected for a millennium
Science measures a distance of reality to modern forward thinking
Ambiguous at best, to describe the confused situation
Paranoid to isolate and subside by heavy doses of medication
Electro shock therapy to bust up the breeding epileptic seizures
Competently screening out the users from the sincere oral pleasers
Amputate the portion of the story that conflicts with the underlying message
Broadcast a retraction to the lead cover luring the next few pages
Forecast a solution to the coping mechanism gone haywire
In time the pulsing cold water will no longer defeat this rising fire
Antecedents that occur after the fact has been proven
Figments of an imagination, a diagnosable illusion
Mediocre care to a body of education, now soliciting legislation
One nation, under God, is hardly headed in the wrong direction
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Re: The Search Goes On
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by ElevenToedSloth on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 01:44:52 AM AEST
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Re: The Search Goes On
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 05:10:52 AM AEST
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Wow you sure bounced back---and with a masterpiece at that!! This is a stunning write, and I thoroughly enjoyed every word of it. The flow was laid back but commanded respect, like someone telling a story...This was chalk full of intense imagery, and there was an exquisite thought process going on in this piece. Very, very impressive!!!
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