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Masking Tape
Contributed by
Row
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Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 05:42:54 AM in AEST
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I'm a maybe
it's always 'possibly'
to and fro
here we come to see
I see you hiding
drowned while diving
under we go
till no one's even trying
shoes off shoes off
hand over your mouth when you cough
you're just ugly
you're just ugly
I don't wanna see
I've been stung by your bee
you're just ugly
you're just ugly
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Re: Masking Tape
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by Contralogicus on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 04:05:21 PM AEST
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Great poem. I especially liked your use of repetition, it gives the poem a sense of urgency, speeds up the rhythm. Good write.
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Re: Masking Tape
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by trixxx on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 08:50:11 AM AEST
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| nice poem, desperation mixed with human nature |
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