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Replacement
Contributed by
guiltycircles
on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 07:01:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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It feeds my need
And wakes me up
Gives me life
And paints my smile
It builds a cupboard
And closes the door
Hiding all the skeletons
From all their eyes
It is the energy
Of walking around
Yet it is my downfall
And pulls me down
It blocks my ears
And opens my eyes
Shuts down their minds
And rocks them to false belief
Taken away
It pulls back the curtains
The darkness of knowledge
Wakes them from their slumber
Now Im sitting
Craving its catalyst
Falling asleep as I weep
Nothing draws me from this sullen
Except that dreamy energy
That closes Pandoras Box
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2005-08-01 07:01:26]
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Re: Replacement
(User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 04:31:48 AM AEST
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| awesome, kiddo = ) |
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Re: Replacement
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 03:52:22 AM AEST
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*nods*
This piece is...intriguing.
Your choice of words are unique, to say the least....an articulate use of personification.
Powerful and mind altering.
Great work :) |
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Re: Replacement
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by SensitiveSoAbused on
Wednesday, 10th August 2005 @ 04:33:24 PM AEST
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Nothing draws me from this sullen
Except that dreamy energy
That closes Pandora’s Box
i like this line...
a very ambiguous poem...
makes the reader wonder...
a good choice of words to give the right atmosphere to the poem, whatever that may be to the reader...
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