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My Letter To You
Contributed by
flirtyrockstar
on
Sunday, 12th January 2003 @ 01:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Sat down here, an hour ago To write myself a letter To write these feelings down I'm not feeling any better My feelings built the pages Your eyes shall never read Your eyes will never feel The ashes they will bleed And flames can not disgard Emotions living inside Emotions living within Believe me, I have tried. I burned that letter down Till there was nothing left Till there was darkened soot And me with love's bereft The font was way too small To stand for such a love To stand for such a passion That was all for you thereof Restating its direction I titled it to you I titled it my dearest And began anew I wrote down everything I had built up over time I had built up for you The grieving was sublime For every night you left me Waiting for you somewhere Waiting for your call to come I have just one more prayer I hope you will remember All that we once had All that we once spoke of And I hope it makes you sad I hope your pain compares To the pain I have once felt To the pain I still feel In each hand that I am dealt The paper, that was white Is now stained with blood Is now stained with my tears As heavy as a flood These wounds that you have dug Will scar my battered eyes Will scar my shattered soul Until my life's demise So here and now I curse The day I again see you The day I fall for your eyes And know my hate is through So this here is my letter I've written you through tears I've written you through heartache It's all as it appears I'll sign it now regretfull For what I'm about to say For what I'm about to send Make these feelings go away Here's my one last kiss I'll send it to the sky I'll send it for my love I love you, and goodbye
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2003-01-12 13:20:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: My Letter To You
(User Rating: 1 ) by Poetic_Angel on
Sunday, 12th January 2003 @ 09:31:50 PM AEST (User
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i like this poem a lot. i've felt this feeling before and it isn't a good one. keep up the good work |
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Re: My Letter To You
(User Rating: 1 ) by FireStorm12 on
Monday, 13th January 2003 @ 08:15:43 PM AEST (User
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That was incredible...brought a tear to my eye. I hope I can write a similar one to my wife who recently left me for a woman. I am greatful to you for showing me how to do it. VERY NICE. Great write. Thank you Thank you Thank you |
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