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My Want for You
Contributed by
gurlytye
on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 06:12:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Late at night
When the rest of the world is asleep
My mind races with questions
Is it you that I can keep
Is it me that can make you happy?
Make you laugh and make you smile
Make you heart beat faster
And know that its all worth while.
Butterflies in my stomach
As I fantasize about you
My world is topsy turvy.
I can only hope you feel it too
I want to make you happy
See that glitter in your eye
I want to take care of you
And never give you reason to wonder why
Ill show you that I love you
With each passing moment
Just wait
And youll see.
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gurlytye
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2005-08-01 18:12:29]
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Re: My Want for You
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 06:31:04 PM AEST
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This was a happy to read poem.
1 thing tho ... why didnt you rhyme the last part. It makes it kinda fall apart at the end.
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Re: My Want for You
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by XxNights_ChildxX on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 10:04:59 PM AEST
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oh how i do love this one :D! i got such funni feelings in my tummy, haha wat a cute poem...makes me wunder where my soul mate is >_>....ill find u boi...one day haha! n e who sorry, great write hunni!
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Re: My Want for You
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by vibes2go on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 12:38:01 AM AEST
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| great to read a happy poem ..;-) |
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Re: My Want for You
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by solosoul on
Wednesday, 3rd August 2005 @ 12:43:39 AM AEST
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| sounds like what i just wanted to write but couldnt get it out right |
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