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Without Sun
Contributed by
Vampire_Slander
on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 07:14:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Pewter mask upon face
this shroud of dark contempt
an emotionless fiend
The night stalker
thirst for blood and tears
this unstable killer
Last shards of humanity
lost in his despair
his inside mind reflects terror
Dull glassy eyes
devoid of shine
so ruthless and terrible
Chilling touch no sign of warmth
dead heart rotten with time
twisted soul without god
This fallen one
lost to mere lust
empty of sunshine
This hunger for life
he seeks his prey
draining essence of blood
Mankind's ageless foe
without mercy
nights greatest disciple
Copyright ©
Vampire_Slander
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2005-08-01 19:14:27]
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Re: Without Sun
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by shelby on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 07:38:54 PM AEST
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chilling, dark, just the way I like em:)
Michelle |
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Re: Without Sun
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 09:39:14 PM AEST
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I like your style of writing.
Your words contain such ....horror.....but beautifullt written and very enticing.
I liked this dark masterpiece.........*shivers*
Keep up the good work! |
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Re: Without Sun
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by XxNights_ChildxX on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 09:58:46 PM AEST
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wow this is an amazin poem, the lasst line is really deep, it sums up ur whole poem quite well actually, great write!
Jenni xxoo |
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Re: Without Sun
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by Vampirequeen on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 03:13:58 AM AEST
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wow i am impress.
awsome write. |
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Re: Without Sun
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by Lady_Ravyn_Bloodstone on
Thursday, 29th December 2005 @ 10:04:44 PM AEST
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| simply amazing... |
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