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Death, My Friend
Contributed by
Redhotchilichic
on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 08:45:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The woman lies quietly in her hospital bed
The intense pain inside her head, too much to bear
Let alone the information the doctor just shared
Suddenly, something in the corner stirred that made her stare
Standing by the visitors chair, surrounded by a glaring light
Appeared a beautiful angel with wings of fire, that burned so bright
He held out his hand, and smiled like an old friend
He was here to relive the poor woman of her impending death
The woman smiled, and taking her last breath
She took the angels hand and followed him into the glorious glow
As she left her lifeless body on the hospital bed below.
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Re: Death, My Friend
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 09:24:21 PM AEST
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WOw.
Very powerful write indeed.
Beautifully written, the style was well organised.
Well done to you! |
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Re: Death, My Friend
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by Xxluckie_lynnxX on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 11:27:42 PM AEST
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Standing by the visitor’s chair, surrounded by a glaring light
Appeared a beautiful angel with wings of fire, that burned so bright
i like that part good job! |
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