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Believing
Contributed by
rkfreak
on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 10:00:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I'd believe everything you told me,
even if half of it was untrue.
Because,all I know is that I have become so
infatuated with you.
No matter how long I tell them, no longer
how hard I try.
So, I ask you will you hold me in your
arms once more.
Protect me as they come pounding at our
locked door.
I'll be fine, forever more, with just one kiss,
What an opportunity I'd hate to miss.
I'll close my mind and think only of you,
Reflection is found only in so few.
For if you left, I'd cry a million tears over,
I'd go ahead and cry on your shoulder...
Copyright ©
rkfreak
... [
2005-08-01 22:00:04]
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Re: Believing
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by bluesbaby811 on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 10:12:53 PM AEST
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| wow thats really great!i think you rea;;y are in love! |
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Re: Believing
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by poisonpen00ad on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 01:07:44 AM AEST
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| Great write but a little short. I only say that because it left me wanting to know more but maybe that is your intent. Great write. |
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Re: Believing
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by ButchCorpuz on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 03:57:07 AM AEST
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Very good poem. I like the flow of lines.
Keep writing!
-Butch |
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