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Attached
Contributed by
HatchetGirl
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Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 11:35:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I was a cold and bitter stone wall when you came along
But somehow you got me to trust you
I had torn out my own heart and handed it right over to you
For the first time I felt cared for and loved
And in return I cared for you and loved you
You gave me anything I asked for even if it ment hurting yourself
And selfishly I took everything from you giving nothing in return
Yet you stuck by my side no matter what
I told you that when your gone I get depressed
So I feel more empty and alone than I ever did before
Are you trying to make me feel better by handing back my heart?
No I don't want it.... I never want to feel again
Please, if you love me keep it... I'll just fall apart with it
I don't want to go back to the way I once was... not letting anyone in
But, don't you see thats what I'm afraid of... not knowing
I just want to know that you will be there when I hit rock bottom and shatter
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2005-08-01 23:35:31]
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Re: Attached
(User Rating: 1 )
by poisonpen00ad on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 12:59:00 AM AEST
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The best poems in my humble opinion are expressed just as you have here. Good write.
Remeber writing is good therapy too. |
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Re: Attached
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by Kitty06 on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 01:55:37 PM AEST
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| Wow, this is a wonderful write. The lines about not wanting your heart back for fear of feeling again and falling apart are the best part of the poem. I've been there, along with my friends, and it's a hard place to be. But I'm sure after you hit rock bottom and shatter you'll find that you're able to pick up the broken pieces and put your heart back and love again. Great write. |
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Re: Attached
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 01:59:26 PM AEST
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| You let it out... a great write... keep up the great work... |
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