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slaves to the rhymes
Contributed by
worldsenigma
on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 11:52:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Dont nobody tell my what to do
thats what I thought
As I
Walked into finish line to buy the newest pair of Tims
As I
Had my boys hook me up with a hot pair of rims
Dont nobody tell me what to do
That's what I use to tell myself
As Id
Pop in another rap CD
And realize
Im doing exactly what they tell me
Apparently
Your not cool unless
your driving in a car you can barely afford
Not cool unless
You were lacing a pair of hundred dollar shoes on your feet
Because weve all heard that beat
That go along with the same lyrics
We all here it
And something about the rhymes
Makes it sink into our spirit
You see the game hasnt changed
Still the same game
Just with different names
Still the same game
Leaving instructions in our brain
Telling us
screw the po-lice
And then I watch the crime increase
Like we all have one brain
One mind
With these lyrics hitting us faster then one mind at a time
Telling us kill that sucka
And I watch my brothers decrease
But I guess thats fine
Cuz with all the baby mama drama
Theyll be another lil brother on the street in no time
See we dont realize weve become slaves to the commercial hip hop industry
Crossing that line between
Entertainment of music
And living the reality
Maybe, we lack the ability
To make up our own minds
So Im asking you take this time to turn your duals down
And listen to the sounds
Cuz we can turn this thing around
One mind
At a time.
Copyright ©
worldsenigma
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2005-08-01 23:52:53]
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Re: slaves to the rhymes
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by Dusty on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 12:29:59 AM AEST
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Wow! I loved this one. What a powerful thought provoking write!
Dusty |
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Re: slaves to the rhymes
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by MorningDove on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 12:35:41 AM AEST
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Powerful excellent message here. We are like sheep being led to slaughter and we walk so nonchalantly in our $150.00 footwear that is made overseas for $15.00 in the sweatshops where children work 12-16 hrs a day. Wearing our $300.00 casual attire with our bling that matches our Beemer. Materialism making the rich man richer and the poor man poorer. Dayummm, are we stupid or what???????????
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Re: slaves to the rhymes
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by poisonpen00ad on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 12:51:22 AM AEST
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| Great write on conformity. Good work! |
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Re: slaves to the rhymes
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by ceazer2005 on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 03:14:54 AM AEST
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| Awesome write! it's great to see someone else express what I've been saying for years |
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