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crying
Contributed by
all_that_i_can_be
on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 02:19:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
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crying constantly, tears dripping down
im forced to smile, never frown
tears fall like rain
no one sees the pain
it hurts more than a gun shot
do they love me? love me not
no one cares, i cry inside
all this pain that i have to hide
i know that this will never get better
mom dont cry when you get this letter
i just want to say goodbye
dont worry, never again,
will i cry
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Re: crying
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by Ineedanap on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 02:44:07 AM AEST
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I really liked your peom. I'm a big fan of short poems when they have enough emotion and i truly liked yours.
Brooke |
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Re: crying
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by lonely-nobody on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 03:30:00 AM AEST
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| very good! your style reminds me of myself sorta. i tend to write like this a lot. |
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Re: crying
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by bruised_angel on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 12:39:54 PM AEST
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| i feel the pain in this poem i like the style to its a great poem |
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Re: crying
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by xthrewmyluvawayx on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 04:33:08 PM AEST
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| awww thats sad....very good....i really like the part where it says " it hurts more than a gun shot do they love me? love me not" i really like that....but i love the poem over all very good ....i can relate to it soo much...very good |
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Re: crying
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by Overstated on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 06:32:33 PM AEST
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| sadness can sometimes be beautiful i think youve found the balance between the two. good stuff |
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Re: crying
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by Misunderstood_gurl on
Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 10:22:11 AM AEST
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| wow..i loved it! i mean this poem describes me all too well! and it was an awesome poem! |
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Re: crying
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by Kazzy1231 on
Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 03:04:01 PM AEST
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| I read this because you replyed 2 one of my poems saying I might understand yours if I read them and I do.Great write I can really understand it. |
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