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I WILL NEVER REGRET
Contributed by
lostrelic
on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 05:25:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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Another cold bleak night wraped in a rain soaked sheet
feeling this concrete bed cuddling and draining the load off my feet
people walk by i hear a woman crying
it must be hard to see me
but no one stops or even cares why this child has been set free
the wind in my face as i lay shivering in the glow of the street light
where will i sleep tommorow or will i not wake up tonight
feeling hungry walking all day takes its toll on the body and the mind
watching people stare at me so unkind
they yell and they spit and chase you away
only with public am i safe from the prey
a small boy is ripe for the perverts that play
looking for children and steal them away
as i look back now soon ill be thirty one
wondering how i have done so much to overcome
scars and nightmares are all that is left
of a life of misery i will never regret
but alone in this room i sit and i smile
to be able to say ive lived
quit awhile
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Re: I WILL NEVER REGRET
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by Belcha on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 06:10:20 AM AEST
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Good string poem, writen with aunthority and detail.
more ! |
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Re: I WILL NEVER REGRET
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by Floo on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 08:31:56 AM AEST
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| An incredibly moving piece.... a delight to read!!! |
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Re: I WILL NEVER REGRET
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by vibes2go on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 10:27:23 AM AEST
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| my son is 37 an he's been living on the streets since 15 .. I did a piece "My Baby In A CArdBoard Box .. it's a long story but your write reminds me of that ... |
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Re: I WILL NEVER REGRET
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by Alibi on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 02:35:51 PM AEST
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| I enjoyed reading this and I can relate to alot of what you said. This is no where near what I'd call 'Abstract' though, better suited to 'emotional', 'anguished' or 'grief and tragic' categories. Your emotions were vivid in this write. A couple lines stood out because they didn't rhymes with anything, in an otherwise rhyme based poem. I also noted a few typos. Keep writing, you have alot to say. |
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Re: I WILL NEVER REGRET
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by all_that_i_can_be on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 03:06:39 PM AEST
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| this poem just makes me want to read more of your work. it was really great. keep up the good work. |
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Re: I WILL NEVER REGRET
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by rx_king on
Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 04:29:28 AM AEST
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| very excellent poem. i'm moved to mental tears putting myself in your position or whoever's point of view this is from. very nice work. |
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