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Nature’s Healing Powers
Contributed by
belcha
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Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 06:35:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Confusion floods into my mind without control
and in my heart lives a great big hole
I try and strive to improve on the whole
but the war is hard on my deminishing soul
Who is out there with the answer
questions in mind more deadly than cancer
I used to be wild and a bit of a chancer
Wanted to be a footballer or even a dancer
Now the time is nearing the end
When all universal elements twist and bend
The Earths death I cant comprehend
By Gods rejuvenating processing trend
Completion is whole untangled and true
Perfection sends me from green to blue
On earth with my time I dont know what to do
To fix these horrible problems all for you
Trees blossom with hope and determination
After years of sunshine and loving cultivation
As Beauty shines across my every sensation
It gives me the gift of preperation
And with this I will heal the nation
Copyright ©
belcha
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2005-08-02 06:35:20]
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Re: Nature’s Healing Powers
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by vibes2go on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 10:30:02 AM AEST
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| the idea of this poem was wonderful but I read it aloud and the rhyme sounded forced in many places. Perhaps if you used "Rhymezone" .. or read aloud .. made it more natural... |
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Re: Nature’s Healing Powers
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by mom11159 on
Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 11:39:08 PM AEST
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excellent poem great message within loved this poem especially the last stanza really summed up the whole poem
cathy |
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