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Beats in Heart Break
Contributed by
Vampire_Slander
on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 08:08:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Thy tragic pulse beats
halting to an echoing end
sounding the name of true love
This mystical remeberance
this over coming of emotion
this shade looms over me
Tension building
towering fears climb to heavens
the touch of true loves final kiss
shining tears fall
each a painful symbol of agony
this thunder storm begins
a howl within wind and land
my high pitched anger
wreaking ball in place
I lay a broken man
cluched tightly to memory
left to exile alone
This conclusion to a horror
my thoughts last eternities
always dwelling on whats missed
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Vampire_Slander
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2005-08-02 20:08:39]
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Re: Beats in Heart Break
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by xxbreathlessx on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 08:13:54 PM AEST
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how sad! the pain from y9our words really come alive. i especially liked the lines:
"Tension building
towering fears climb to heavens
the touch of true loves final kiss "
keep up the great work. |
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Re: Beats in Heart Break
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by vibes2go on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 09:44:28 PM AEST
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| i really enjoyed this write i could really feel your emotion |
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Re: Beats in Heart Break
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by EricBRamey on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 09:46:22 PM AEST
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| Wow...I'm feeling your pain!!! I write a lot of poetry about loss/sorrow as well so I know where you are coming from...a good read and a wonderful addition to the site!!! |
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Re: Beats in Heart Break
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by vibes2go on
Wednesday, 3rd August 2005 @ 01:06:58 AM AEST
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| I enjoyed this .. it touches on what is so hard to do..let go... |
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Re: Beats in Heart Break
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 01:33:48 AM AEST
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i loved the write,and its so true.I feel you,what you mean and stuff.well,hang tuff.t/c.
love,
andrea |
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