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Bruises
Contributed by
rosewoodtree
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Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 09:52:58 PM in AEST
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Scream at her
Let her go
No one notices
No one knows
silenced by night
Soothed by the dark
No one can sleep
With a broken heart
Kindly she stands there
Angry in pain
She cant let it show
She cant bare the pain
Her father he loves her
Deep down inside
But his feelings of hurt show
In the bruises they cant hide
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Re: Bruises
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 10:35:59 PM AEST
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very hurtful read and love is never supposed to hurt like this niocely written but sorry for the pain
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Re: Bruises
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by poet70 on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 11:29:07 PM AEST
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This is a painful poem of fighting and abuse. And depending on your age, things could have been different, I know in my days being hit around wasn't all that big of a deal, spankings was the things, and in front of people, heck it was never hid, but not now, it is abuse, and it is a good thing to a point, brusing is to far, to rough, that is abuse in my eyes, don't remember my folks loosing it to the point of bruises, so I am sorry to read this poem and read where this father seems to do that;
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Re: Bruises
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by all_that_i_can_be on
Wednesday, 3rd August 2005 @ 12:56:51 AM AEST
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| almost made me cry. so.....im not even sure how to put it into words. its such a real issue, that so many people just refuse to deal with. its an amazing poem. |
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Re: Bruises
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by sprinter27 on
Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 10:54:08 AM AEST
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very sad write... and i wish that you weren't put up to suffer through this pain. i wish people would see that nothing good comes out of abusing a child. good write, keep it up.
sending lots of luck to you!
~sprints |
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Re: Bruises
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 6th August 2005 @ 11:49:55 PM AEST
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| wow its strong. i know how u feel my dad was an alcholic and he beat me and my mom alot but now we are safe |
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