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Loveliness
Contributed by
rkfreak
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Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 10:45:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Such a lovely noise, I have never heard.
As I gaze upon thee, all else seems blurred.
I question my intentions, and why I love thee.
Then I remember, its something the naked eye
can't see.
I forget everything as you hold me tight.
My fears, I no longer need to fight.
Tell me, my love , will you always be there?
For if you leave me, my heart in two, it shall tear.
I long to taste thine lips, I just need one kiss.
Hold me as we sit forever, in this state of bliss.
I claim thee as my own.
Without you, I was far too alone.
And even as my life begins to fade,
My love for thee shall still cascade.
So listen to me when I say,
I shall love you till my dying day.
Copyright ©
rkfreak
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2005-08-02 22:45:05]
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Re: Loveliness
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 10:51:43 PM AEST
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flowing, soothing and romantic write. True love at its best.
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Re: Loveliness
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by poet70 on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 11:19:51 PM AEST
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wonderful ryming work, each flowed so smoothly, I WAS really drawn into it, and the love that is in this poem is strong and amazing, I LOVE IT.
Tammi,
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Re: Loveliness
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by xthrewmyluvawayx on
Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 01:02:09 AM AEST
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| aww i loved it...very sweet and romantic!!very good job keep writing |
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